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chinaman
Junior Member
since 2000-08-26
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-09-19 08:49 PM


***

Today I stood on the edge of a cliff
Deciding to bring an untimely death to this restless soul
Two thoughts came to my mind
Why am I doing this ? Where am I going to go from here ?

The path I have taken now
Will not have any shade of you not even your name
Don't tell that you loved me
Don't tell me that you wanted me all along
You can't reach me now
For I have blocked you out of my life forever

I worshipped you once and you were the crux of my life
I waited enough showing the love I had for you
You were just busy playing games
You'll regret this day for I have set on a voyage of finding my spirit as it was once
Before it was tainted by your treacherous instints

******

Preface (though its in the end)

I was about to consume lots of sleeping pills yesterday and have an eternal sleep. Just the thought of everyone who had supported me throughout came in and I wanted to live. Not again as a depressed melancholic but as a rejuvenated person wanting to live.

© Copyright 2000 chinaman - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-19 11:50 PM


Oh yes Chinaman
Do Live
I Have had to reach deep within myself lately to find stregnth that I had given up so many years ago out of love.
Now that I've regained my stregnth and back bone and own will
I feel I am the person I use to be so very long ago
Thank you
for this poem
it has opened my eyes and reminded me to always hang on to my spirit within
Great Job
Bluebrdy

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