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Dark Poetry #2

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Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-09-19 03:42 PM

You

O my beloved,
Hold forth your hands
That I may place therein
The desolate, shattered shell
Of what was once my heart.
And if by chance
There should remain
A semblance still
Of life at your dear touch,
Be not afraid...
It lies quite dead, yet dying
Cannot lose
The consciousness
Of You.

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

1 posted 2000-09-19 11:53 PM

Oh Rex how beautiful and Sad
Yet I understand and know how it feels
for your heart to die
and yet.....
Great piece
Bluebrdy

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

2 posted 2000-09-20 01:35 PM

I liked this one alot! Great style, with such a romantic flare! I will be watching your work. Thanks for sharing....

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

3 posted 2000-09-20 02:44 PM

Illusion....Thank you very much for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much. I have about 58 poems on this site, all of which are from my book "Songs of Sorrow". Thanks again. Regards, Rex.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-09-20 10:22 PM

Rex, as always, your writing enthralls me.
Sandra

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