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chinaman
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since 2000-08-26
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-09-18 03:27 PM




In the process of cleansing the evil thoughts,which came in during the process of reasoning
I found that love,for you,is a  wonderful seasoning to garnish your lusty cake
The day you left to seek your next victim,I began to rediscover my life without your cunningness
I had tasted all along the wrath of deceipt in your cruel eyes and you'll meet the same fate
Just now you slipped out of my memmories and I have blocked you for all my life
There was a time when I wanted you as my wonderful wife all my life
You are a rattle snake slithering silently in desert heat and preying on the innocent
You are a devil in disguise and creating in men a sense of discontent  
I shouldn't have believed in your friendly smiles and tender words from the start
A life with you will be a life with a sinner who is infested with all cruel thought
Dark princess I bid adieu to you in broad daylight
You'll regret all your life for playing with me for so many years


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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-18 03:30 PM


Interesting...hope you find an angel as you rediscover your life...James
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-09-19 12:58 PM


Wow! Such anger!  But I guess the ending is good... banishing the devil will certainly feel a lot better!    Liked it!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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