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glorybox
Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26


0 posted 2000-09-18 11:04 AM


"O"

Again
The choice to be
The mistress or the madonna
Secret desire
Secretly touching of thoughts impure
Infidelity of the mind

Wanting the craving
Wanting the sin
Wanted deceit
Again

Controlling the urge
Controlling the freedom
Controlled by him
Again

Pleasure by thought
Pain by waking
In arms too tight
Hands too strong
Around my throat

Desiring the thought of gentleness
Giving myself to tender sounds
Bowing down to taste his fists
Forget the choice
Again



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JSage
Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA
1 posted 2000-09-18 04:13 PM


That is absolutley amazing!  I love it...  and it's so dark and mysterious and bad an wrong and wonderful.  I don't even need to know what exactly it's about.  I just love it.

-Jes

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-09-19 03:01 PM


I agree. This is fantastic! Such intensity of feeling. Wow! This reminds me why I like DP!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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