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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585


0 posted 2000-09-18 11:04 AM



Hey everyone, I'm sorry for not participating more actively on the forum lately but I'm just couple of days before my exams and I have absolutely no time to write or read more of the great stuff we got here on DP! Sorry, I'll try to catch up after my finals are over!
Hope you'll enjoy this, I took a little break  

Believer

Suspicious of belief through-out my life,
I simply mocked and ridiculed religion.
My time has come to finally realize
Completely unaware I joined the legion.
Not for the sake of promissed paradise,
To heaven no such thing as cheaper ticket!
I am no saint but guilty of a crime -
Surrendering to a game so cruelly wicked.
If love is sin, I'm doomed to spend my time
By doing wrong and worshiping the evil
For love is my belief, religion, faith!
And one who tries to shake it is the devil.
Don't tempt me, I have sworn to keep my strenght.
Don't dare to disillusion me and notice,
Of flesh and blood is one I call "my God"...
Believe me not, dissuade me not, just know this!


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


© Copyright 2000 LM - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-18 02:19 PM


LM~~~I am so sorry that I havent gotten back to you yet. I got that e-mail though. What a story.

Good poem!!!

Oh and good luck with your exams!!!


*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-18 02:36 PM


Hey Erin!  
I'm glad you got it, I tend to have problems with my connections and sometimes my e-,ails are getting lost, and I could never write aaaallllll that long long story again  
Thanks for the reply, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the good luck wish!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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