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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-09-18 02:36 AM



she was the most beautiful thing i'd ever seen
i played football in the street
i missed everything that came my way
i saw her today
within my dreams she was to come
we walked around the block
we talked
the angel in my life  
had finally arrived
we took flight within eachother
we knew a smile together
I ran myself into the ground
wasn't quite the talk of the town
if you could only see a woman so bright
if you could help me hold her tonight
missing a person holds depth inside
but one love is precise
no answers whatsover, not running
not chasing, only one

Peace, Love,&Happiness--Forever
                    J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-18 05:46 AM


carolinadreams,
this is a good write, I particularly liked the last line.
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-18 06:41 AM


Oh Carolina
I love this piece
as I read I melted
beautiful poem
Blue

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