Fraudulent Soul - I fear it is too late......

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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-09-17 07:17 PM

Fraudulent soul,
What gives you the justification,
To do what you do?
Reward? Condemnation?

Crafty, emotional perversions,
Is that how you get your kicks?
What power of darkness
Taught you these tricks?

Deception, dishonesty,
They are your middle names,
I'd pass it by,
If I had that type of fame.

Malformation of the spirit,
A soul turned away from the light,
Doppleganger personality,
Without the will to fight.

Soulless entity,
How dare you even breath,
A soul as blackened as yours,
The good find hard to believe.

Perjurer against all good,
So jealous of friendship and happiness,
Your hatred shall be your undoing,
Wanna put that theory to the test?

As an empath I make this predicition,
The future I see for you,
Lonely, unloved, forgotten old burden on society,
For the way is set now, there is nothing you can do.

Treachery brings it's own rewards,
Life everlasting with the dark and feared hordes,
Longing for peace with our Saviour and Lord,
But for you a painful eternity, prodded by imps with swords.

Rest in peace,
I bless your darkened soul,
But all see too clearly,
The devil now has you in his control......

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*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 09-17-2000).]

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

1 posted 2000-09-17 07:25 PM

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
such emoition. truly masterful hun. i love it. *hugS* i am adding this to the libray sis.
love ya
jesse

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-09-17 07:53 PM

Isis this is excellent writing...such a strong message....James

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-09-17 08:02 PM

Thanks Jesse and James

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-09-18 07:57 PM

Excellent my friend. . .

Shows that there are some who see people better than most. . .

Wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

5 posted 2000-09-19 12:21 PM

Great work here, Isis! excellent work once again.

Peace DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-09-19 08:25 PM

Thanks guys!

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2000-09-20 10:20 PM

My goodness! I think I know this guy! Great writing, Isis.
cat...

Night Chica
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 39
Vermont

8 posted 2000-09-21 06:03 PM

Oh, wow, Isis, this poem is wonderful. Your words bring the truth though, what goes around comes around and hopefully whoever this is describing will get what is coming to him.

These guys you just have to seem to forgive and forget (well maybe not forgive...but forgetting sounds pretty good

)

I've had a run in with a guy like that and I take comfort in knowing that someday he'll get his share of what he dishes out to others (even though it hasn't happened yet.)

Stand Tall Isis, like you always do.

Megs

I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.

-- Margaret Mitchell

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

9 posted 2000-09-22 02:16 AM

Thanks Cat and Megs!

Meg I stand tall and alone hon, I have to, but I do it willingly and with love in my heart. All those wrong doers DO get their's in the end as they should. I don't just believe that I KNOW it. Thanks for the great response, it's really appreciated

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

10 posted 2000-09-22 10:23 PM

Isis, I've found your poems always seem to dig for a deeper truth and always find it

great job !! Missed having a chance to get in here and read ...and when I do get in here it's great to know you guys are all still writting such beautiful poetry !!

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