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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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U I miss U so badly I can't see and I am hit with reality Of what went wrong with this surreal song Such an unaccustomed tune So now I am doomed! I miss U no stopping this torrid tide that held me to your side I can see now what went wrong A different score Than what we had before So I return once again to the bliss of U I can't help but loving U or wanting what is true FOR....... I am madly in love with "U" the one I "thought" I knew but all I am left with now, IS... THE... DEEP... COLD... BLUE!!!! [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
illusion, good poem. *Hugs*. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
((hugs)) illusion. It's very sad, love is such a complicated emotion... it has so many emotions combined together it's so easy to get lost in them... I really relate to this. I hope you'll get out of the deep blue (something)  and feel better again. All the best!"Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hi Illusion Yes, I agree with LM.... love is indeed very complex... sometimes you wonder if it's all worth it... to the deep blue days  Written very well ! Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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