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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
What right have I to feel like this Please tell me that, what right So brief our time in Cupids view What is this need I have of you If you were gone what would I do? Just tell me please, what right.? What law demands we be as one Please tell me that, what law Why does your contact make me smile What puts my feelings up for trial Should life without you be so vile Just tell me please, what law? What God commands our souls are bound Please tell me that, what God What made me cast my net anew A Disciple made to follow you Allow my heart to worship you Please tell me that, what God? What song requires I sing your praise Please tell me that, what song Your name invokes melodious note My life to you, I will devote Deep thoughts in me your words promote Please sing that song for me What canvas dares to show your look Please tell me that, please do No artist born could paint your grace No colors made for your embrace No brush to stroke your porcelain face Please paint your love for me |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oops! double up!  < !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"what canvas dares to show your look please tell me that, please do no artist born could paint your grace no colours made for your embrace no brush to stroke your porcelain face please paint your love for me" oh this is a great poem, especially the ending! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
OH MY GOD!!! you've left me speachless... this is trully amazing! Wonderful! I stand up and applaud your talent and thoughts and words... remarkable piece...I'm saving this... "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Sorry, I just had to say it once more... Oh My God!!! "What right have I to feel like this Please tell me that, what right So brief our time in Cupids view What is this need I have of you If you were gone what would I do? Just tell me please, what right.? What law demands we be as one Please tell me that, what law Why does your contact make me smile What puts my feelings up for trial Should life without you be so vile Just tell me please, what law? What God commands our souls are bound Please tell me that, what God What made me cast my net anew A Disciple made to follow you Allow my heart to worship you Please tell me that, what God? it's just sooo brilliant, right from my heart and my mind it's increadible... |
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