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Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-09-14 02:56 PM

Love is wasted on you.
It is constantly being poured into you,
and yet, constantly, none seems to ever come out.
None.
You show no love, no compassion.
Do you have any hope?
Do you have any dreams or wishes?
Do you obtain any of these?
Do you feel the love that you're enveloped in?
Can you feel any of the love
we put into you?
Or is it that you are just so numb
that you don't even care?
Questions only you can answer,
hope only you can give.
Love only you can give out,
life only you can live.

I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-09-14 03:04 PM

i know someone id like to read this poem to..but it would just fall on deaf ears!
great one again!!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

Nicki
Junior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 14

2 posted 2000-09-14 03:48 PM

MY ex boyfriend needs to read this, he was pretty heartless himself! well written, it touched me in my heart-broken zone. I liked it.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-15 01:25 AM

Or is it that you are just so numb
that you don't even care?

I should print this poem out and give it to my sister. She is the most cold hearted person I have ever known and probably will ever know. Excellent work!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-09-16 02:29 AM

lilOnE,
this is a great poem. I know a few ppl who are like this "comfortably numb."

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-09-16 05:47 AM

It seems the kind of people you would say this too are the ones least interested in hearing or acting on love...the ones interested in love and caring are the ones that are actively engaged in it...James

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