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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-13 07:33 AM


Insanity is just around the corner
I try not to give in without a fight
it seems to be taking all the delight out of my life
I struggle with myself only to find all is not right
as the days run into the nights
I wail out in this unending plight.

© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-13 12:02 PM


You've expressed your emotions loud and clear. I think that we have all felt that way or will feel that way at one point in our lives.

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-09-13 08:59 PM


Well expressed indeed!  But it's not insanity just around the corner, tumultous emotions you must learn to deal with as we all have too.
Well done hon  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-09-13 10:47 PM


It's a bad feeling, I know. You can fight it though. Keep writing, and caring.
Peace
catalinamoon

Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
4 posted 2000-09-14 10:35 PM


*Stomps feet*
Insanity is MY department!  Hehe…
If you don’t want yours,  then please send it to me!
I’m running low, just thought you should know…

Ok, that was a little rhyme…ehehe
Good work, but I don’t like everyone poking fun at the insane!  We’re PERFECTLY healthy people, just not mentally…lalalalalablahbabanah

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