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Michael
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0 posted 09-13-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

WHISPERS


Ah, they whisper, "whisper - whisper",
Whisper, even still...
As I walk the long and lulling,
Needing, nodding hill.
Bleeding Sorrow by the morrow,
Bleeding, burning, still.
Silence shaking in the waking
Of all good - to ill.

Shape me - rape me, Darkness drape me
In your robes of plight -
By the droning of the moaning
Dead that walk this night -
By the shadows, long and lulling,
Pulling even still...
As I walk the sleepy, creepy,
Needing, nodding hill.

Pale hands to me thus imbue me
Wayward towards the sun.
Subtle, profound, (all without sound),
Lingering shadows run.
By the trying of love, dying,
Shall Beauty unseen...
Whisper to me of a newly
Veiled Hope I must glean.

Whisper to me, whisper through me,
Whisper even still -
Of a Sorrow bled tomorrow
On winds, quiet and still.
Perchance to fade, amidst the glade
Of passions held afore,
In one needing, nodding, bleeding
Glimpse of evermore

Michael Anderson
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1 posted 09-13-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for Virgin Su´cide   Email Virgin Su´cide   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Virgin Su´cide's Home Page   View IP for Virgin Su´cide

Wow, this was like REALLy intense.... I loved it!!

luvz, Virgin Su´cide

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~
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2 posted 09-13-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

hey you...just prowling around and look what I found...effectively assonant...(learned a new woid, heh heh)  I curtsey to the Prince of Darkness...

later-gator-gator!!!
(that was for JM...)

so now you know what humidity is, eh?  hee hee...hope you are well and happy, m'friend.
LM
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3 posted 09-13-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for LM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LM

It was really great!
I'm very impressed   Loved your rhyming style! Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

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4 posted 09-13-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Welcome back oh Dark Lord, glad to see you in here again!!  
As usual a masterpiece of emotion  
You may not see much of me over the next couple of weeks (School Hols here) but I'll be around and hope to catch up with you soon.
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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5 posted 09-14-2000 07:04 AM       View Profile for moshpit   Email moshpit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moshpit

LM is right, the rhyming style is great.. great piece, Michael.

Rosebud1229
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6 posted 09-15-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

there's something very soothing about the way you write, even if it is dark , enjoyed!
Kethry
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7 posted 09-16-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

WOW


This is dark and brilliant all at once.



Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
Susan Caldwell
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Still reading..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

 
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