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gjam
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since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-12 01:13 PM




  Just set me free,
please let me be
  release my heart
so I can be me

  You try so hard
to make me smile
  It works too well
that's why I fell

  You just can't give
your heart to me
  or anyone else
how can this be?

  You've fallen for me
you told me so
  but your past just won't
let your heart go

  So when it's free
give me a call
  I'd be willing to bet
Once again I'll fall

  For now this is how
things have got to be
  it's time to move on
It's time to be me

© Copyright 2000 Greg Jamison - All Rights Reserved
summer
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
1 posted 2000-09-12 03:55 PM


oh i really enjoyed this...its funny while in love especially in the beggining you do lose a sence of yourself you forget what is important to yourself...soak up this time you have with yourself it can be very insighstful spending time with yourself!!!
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-12 05:23 PM


This was amazing!!WOW I like it alot. Good work. 2 thumbs up for you!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

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