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The Webbing of Me

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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 09-11-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dopey Dope

Here is another poem from my 5th Cycle.

The Webbing of Me:


Enchanted forest crashes down.
My mouth was a smile,
But now is a frown.

I run as fast as time can run.
I time myself,
And the web I spun.

Years are gone but minutes here.
I walk amongst land
That I fear to fear.

Sip of water lost within.
Trying to catch food
So the web I spin.

The tears of encantation delight
Makes my mouth water,
Yet my soul in fright.

Insidious icycles waiting to be.
I despise the cold.
The web is me.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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1 posted 09-12-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bluebrdy65

Good job Poet
the web is me
I can understand and relate to this poem
keep up the good work
Blue
anonymousfemale
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2 posted 09-23-2001 01:13 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

An interesting concept here. You being the web and all. There are some great thoughts running around in my head at the moment. Only one reply though? *tsks* that's just not right.  
You should revise this and expand on it a bit. It'd be good to see it in a longer, more indepth format.

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

 
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