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Alas, the Final Scapegoat!

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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 09-11-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dopey Dope

Yes well i am a new poet in Dark Passions. All of my previous poems and work are all posted up in Teen Poetry #3. These poems are from my 5th Cycle (my junior year in highscool). The poems in Teen Poetry #3 consist of me as a freshman (9th grade) in highschool. Anyway, here's the poem for all of you people. Comments, critism, anything whatsoever?

Alas, the Final Scapegoat:


Is this not a meaningful life?
A dripple of water, a beam of light.
So little in quantity,
Yet at the right moment
So praised as a heavenly gift.

And death?
Where oft blows winds of stillness.
The insidious frost locked in place.
A lonely setting to fixate upon,
And it awaits us all.

To ere angels devine.
Smiling in laconic bliss.
Oh site of sites!
And life, sweet life!
May it fade within thine eyes.

Lo the hypocritical axis of concrete phases!
Tis all that becons, and commands.
We lay within our stand still time.
Death being the last scapegoat,
And I being the last of me!





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 09-11-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Making me think a little bit..
Life is worth living
and deaths only mission
is to take our life away...James
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
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2 posted 09-11-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

Dopey~~~Im glad that you decided to post here. This poem brought different types of thoughts to my head. Dont ask me why cause I dont know!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~
Jannel
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 498
Muncie, IN, USA


3 posted 09-12-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for Jannel   Email Jannel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jannel

i liked it... and you have a wonderful vocabulary. (i like big words) please keep posting here.  

jann elizabeth



Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
Devil lover, time awaits you
Now the party's over
You're on your own

-the eels
anonymousfemale
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4 posted 09-23-2001 01:00 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Oooo look what I found.  

This is really different to what you're writing now. I like this one a ton. As I'm a big fan of death and his work, same with you, it hit a spot in me. Definitely worth hunting you down for.

Thanks for the read, Javi.  

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

 
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