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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-09-10 09:26 PM


All alone in my world,
I cry out to the ones who will listen.
The people who know me best, the beings who live to care for me.
I miss a life I once had, a joy I once felt.

Painful, stabbing tears stream down my face.
My messed up world is spinning again...
I revolve, dizziness prevails.
Once soft hugs, now sandpaper thrashings.

You mean no harm to me, I realize you try.
But a world of hurt cannot be erased by an ounce of your affection.
I need to love the one I am, a feat currently so unattainable.

* this isn't true to life... it's one of those EXAGERRATED pieces... I just wanted to make an impact.. whatcha think?



[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Virgin Suïcide
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1 posted 2000-09-11 11:52 AM


I liked this one  ! hehe, kinda like me....

love, Virgin Suïcide...


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

a_little_girl
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2 posted 2000-09-11 05:37 PM


Wow, this is incredible. You should post in this forum more often, Jenn. Great Job!!  
--Little Girl

eegood
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3 posted 2000-09-11 06:01 PM


it's a knockout....very descriptive of a emotional rollercoaster ride
gjam
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4 posted 2000-09-12 12:22 PM


This is good..... i feel like the poem is me on the inside...but don't worry guys..it's not my outside....my pain is within.......Good poem....
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