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The end of the Fair...
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Emersed was the stranger, Emersed in the lights and rides and cotton candy that I did forget that my old loves were around me... Not for long though... It seems as if Fate likes to torment those of us who are almost healed from our wounds.. But a smirk roused itself on the disfigured face of mine... Why???? Because life is short and I learned my lesson... If you dwell on something too long, you become a tormented creature that can't think or function. Beleive you me, I know that feeling. So as the time of the fair ends, I will enjoy myself and be glad... {I hope this is good} There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah Lonelypoet! Way to go!  Life certainly is too short - might as well try and enjoy each and every precious minute Enjoyed your poem! Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yeah! perfect ending, perfect decision you came too! It is good to mourn your losses and learn from them, but even BETTER to move on with hope and optimism!! Bravo hon  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked this a lot. especially the beginning. some incredible images here. carnivals always have this certain air of mystery where anything could happen. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you dwell on something too long you become a tormented creature that can't think or function." So true..I have been that tormented creature..James |
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