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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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YOUR SEASONS Your hands caress like snowflakes of winter Your smile shines soft rays of summer Your heart beats the spring rythm rain Your laughter washes away September's pain Your voice rumbles the calm of a storm Your thoughts take shape like clouds form Your mind whirls like cool summer breeze Your feet dance like fall rustling leaves Your eyes sparkle like midnight star Your warmth reminds that you're not too far These are the seasons, you, life wouldn't be the same. Take either away, & I'll go insane! I love Keith  Ok this poem was just written yesterday morning as I listened to the rain fall. I was still half asleep so don't yell cause it sux LOVE ELMO <3 |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awww...it's a cute poem...I liked it... Dark Star |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
it DOESN'T suck!!! It's really cute and nice and sweet... All the best! LM P.S. You got rain over there??? Not fair! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi qtpieelmo, The poem is wonderful and welcome to passions I have not yet read any of your work, very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Elmo~~~This is so sweet. Wow you seem like you can write about anything. You have talent! I really enjoy reading your work!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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