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I Want You
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I Want You |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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I I want to drown in your eyes I want to drown in your desires I want to feel your dreams I want to hear your screams I want your beating heart with mine I want to be wrapped in your shrine I want to feel, hear your delight I want to see your ecstasy of flight I want to drown I want to hear I want to feel I want to see I want You. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tara you reminded me of an old Bob Dylan song called "I Want You". I have a woman who I feel this way about now...I wish I had written this poem for her...James |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Cool poem...I feel like I wanna feel a lot (did that make any sense?!?) Dark Star |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Taramw, very well expressed! I agree with james. There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
James... thanks for the reply  You can always write one of your own - I'm sure it would be better than mine! Hiya Dark Star Yep, knew what you meant  Lonelypoet... thanks for your comments! You can write one of your own too ~ Tara ~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I want to read more poems like this!! Well expressed and done! *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tara, I know how you feel. I want someone just that much. Great poem. Sandra |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is good, Tara. I know exactly how you feel right now and it is VERY painful. I have the same longing, (out of love) and your poem made me miss him very badly... --Little Girl |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
All I can say is WOW!! I can feel this one deep down in marrow of my bones |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Tara, lucky this one passed by the censors. An excellent expression of need and consumption. A nice contrast to your last post. Josh |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Isis, Sandra, Little Girl, eegood and Josh: Thank you very much for your comments! I really do appreciate them! Glad you liked the poem ~ Tara ~ |
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