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Succomb to the Dark
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Succomb to the Dark |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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the darkest hour..... the one that rears it's ugly head takes you by seize to lie in it's bed and will not let go of your heart killing you alone keeping you apart apart from the freedom you seek and holding you down to the ground to suffocate your soul it is there to take it's toll you will never break free through the dark you will not see it screams it's ugly lies until you want to die lay down and retreat accept defeat let your head hang low this is what it screams I feel the darkest has come to it I finally have succumb |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Great poem! Know the darkest hour... you've written it well! I too wrote a poem once about succumbing to the darkness!  Take care."A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Woooohaaaa! This was great! "Succumb to the dark..." wow! great title and the whole thing. You wrote about it wonderfully Take Care! |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Hello! I don't usually come into this forum....but I am glad I did now!! This was a great read. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Really great poem. I loved it. Dark Star |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was a GREAT poem about the discouragement that any darkest hour can bring. You've put some great images in this one. Good job! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I hope you have only succumbed to the darkness for a little while! You need to draw strength and courage to battle on, to fight another day. Well written *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
well written and very poetic description. i enjoyed this. i think we;ve all been there. Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Too deep for me to anaylize...all I can say this one is treasure to be kept. |
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