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After the Return
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After the Return |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
After the Return the stranger had to return to his work... His thoughts constantly thought of the place... His heart troubled yet no one will know. They will never know what he feels... Not ever again...... His heart will be closed forever execpt for that one soul.. She was the only one who understood yet she is oceans apart from me day by day and I know I will go insane without that smile. The Lonelypoet has found the one.... The one who he shall call SOULMATE... Thankfully no one know's.... But her.... I hope she knows..... There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
that's beautiful. i hope for you that she knows, too... Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul Devil lover, time awaits you Now the party's over You're on your own -the eels |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow!!!I like this one. Just like Jannel said i hope that for you she knows!!! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
OOOhhh.....hope she comes back soon!  Cute poem Take care!"Did I ask too much? More than a lot You gave me nothing Now it's all I got..." U2/One |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awww Lonelypoet this is just so beautiful. If you are writing about your own situation... how sad you are oceans apart!  I do hope she knows! Take Care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is lovely! many of us share this situation, and it isnt easy, but it is worth it! beautiful thoughts here. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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