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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
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Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-09-07 09:06 PM


Laughing
(yay for me! my first happy poem)

Sitting with my friends
Having a good time
Laughing
And making this little rhyme

Making little jokes
Being there makes it ok
Laughing
All my fears away

Smiling at them all
I’m filled with glee
Laughing
Finally I’m free


© Copyright 2000 Danielle Zumstein - All Rights Reserved
Nikolette Sadness
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port richey fl.
1 posted 2000-09-07 09:15 PM


wait a sec danni...your happy and i'm not...no fair...make me laugh fool!
heheh there i go...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
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Port Richey, Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-09-07 09:17 PM


Hehe...Thanks Nik...

Dark Star

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
3 posted 2000-09-07 09:18 PM


This one is cool. Have a laugh or two for me, would ya...lol.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

4 posted 2000-09-08 02:44 AM


This is good darkstar... I could actually hear the pure delight in being free  
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-09-08 02:47 AM


I realized that I could be in the worst mood, but if someone makes me smile or laugh it just erases all the memories of bad thoughts for the time. Keep on laughing its good for you!!
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
6 posted 2000-09-08 06:18 AM


its great to see you smiling! hope the feeling lasts....and it made for a very nice poem!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
7 posted 2000-09-08 06:55 AM


heya darkstar!!! it's just great to read this one!!  love to see ya happy    
   !keep 'em coming!  

   love, Virgin Suïcide!  
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"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....




[This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-08-2000).]

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

8 posted 2000-09-08 12:24 PM


Hey Darkstar!  
I'm so happy you're laughing and having a good time! I love it when people laugh, I'm proud to say that I usually make people laugh actually   Maybe it's my laughter...Some say it's addicting  
Great poem, made me wanna meet up with my friends today!

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

9 posted 2000-09-08 12:24 PM


Hey Darkstar!  
I'm so happy you're laughing and having a good time! I love it when people laugh, I'm proud to say that I usually make people laugh actually   Maybe it's my laughter...Some say it's addicting  
Great poem, made me wanna meet up with my friends today!

"Did I ask too much?
More than a lot
You gave me nothing
Now it's all I got..."
U2/One

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