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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-07 06:06 PM


Lookin down a one way street,
I carry on,
Unable to turn around,
I carry on,
Just follow the road,
I carry  on,
Longing to find a turn,
To go back.


What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

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bluebrdy65
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Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-07 06:16 PM


good poem
looking down a one way road
I know how this feels
great job
Blue

Jannel
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2 posted 2000-09-07 06:17 PM


simple, but full of reality. i enjoyed reading it.
pegasus111
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3 posted 2000-09-08 08:37 AM


ahhh..Maria, love, don't ever look back..something might be gaining on you.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-09-08 04:23 PM


bluebrdy - Thanks for coming this way

Jannel - Thanks

pegasus - ok i'm running now.... ta

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

silentsky
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5 posted 2000-09-09 01:37 PM


i loved this. its so simply true that it pulls me in.
a feeling expressed beautifully.
shira

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