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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Just something I scrapped right now, instead of studying!!! Damn... I gotta go study  Just had to add one more stanza coz yesterday it was undone...  I Used To I used to love you more than life More than Mom and Dad and all I used to flush with thought of you And for you I sold my soul... I used to watch your every move, Your walk and smile so kind I collected all the memorries And carved them in my mind. I used to worship air you breathe And ground you walked upon, I've put you on my pedestal Of gold and precious stones. I used to wake and think of you And dreams of you to store. I used to think I love you most Now I love you more... [This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is cute LM..and I agree, you should study.. get thee to thy books... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Pegasus Thanks for the comment! I'll study...maybe tomorrow... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this is so sweet LM...By the way what are you studing?? |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Erin: EVERYTHING!!! I have tons of exams I have to do all over again coz I really messed up this semester... So right now it's descrete math and economy and later - physics and something that has to do with my profession which is Industrial engeneering & management. Whoooohaaaa!! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh yeah, Erin, thanks for your reply!  Almost forgot... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
really really sweet!! luvd to read it!!! made me very happy!! love, Virgin Suïcide! "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Virgin At least I made you happy "Did I ask too much? More than a lot You gave me nothing Now it's all I got..." U2/One |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
yes, this is very sweet indeed! *sigh*..love can be so wonderful and so terrifying all at the same time...looks like the wonderful part is on your mind at the moment!! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Haha! Yes it's wonderful in a way but on the other hand... You know? The addiction... I was just sitting and thinking about how it was couple of years ago and that maybe it has softened a little by now. But then I realised it only got deeper... It's just so much a part of me right now I don't really think of it as something unusual anymore, you know? Thank you for replying on my stuff! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I enjoyed this alot...Very very Sweet!~ ~Cherie~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thank You Beth I'm glad you think so |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I liked your poem it was nice, and make sure to study |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thank you Ginners! I will... |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
love the poem...heheh i feel the same way about a certain person...the bad part is i dont want to love him anymore...it just wont stop... Nik p.s. email me!!! i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Nik... I do think you and I are the same person... Thank you dear for your reply I will, I will |
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