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Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

0 posted 2000-09-06 02:54 PM



listlessness arrives
to send the world away
grey atmosphere
suffocates its prey gingerly
nervous, twitching from her comfort
sad eyes ponder the prospect
of only one pillow

black        and          white
black   and   white
black and white
andgrey

silverfang spiders crickets and the two a.m. train
share the dimming life

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-06 04:41 PM


it's hard to be alone and lonely..much sadness here..well written..like the format.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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