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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-09-06 08:42 AM



I'm coming nearer
Every second I get closer
To you, my dear
Believe me!
Trust my word...
The time is coming
Time for me to meet
My one and only friend...
Death, here I come!

Christopher, plz leave it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....




[This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-06-2000).]

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-06 05:35 PM


I wish that I could express myself the way that you do. You have such talent!!I really do enjoy reading your work. But can I ask you one thing?? Do you really feel this way??

YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS


a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
2 posted 2000-09-06 05:42 PM


People should never think that way, Suicide. You have one life to live and you gotta look at it from a positive view. If this is a reflection of what you think of life, then I suggest that you change it!!
--Little Girl

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
3 posted 2000-09-06 07:19 PM


Cool poem...I liked it...you shouldn't think 'bout suicide, it ain't healthy (I'm such a hypocrite...hehe) ain't ain't a word but it is in the dictionary so I am gonna use it...sorry 'bout the blurb of nonsense, I learned it in elementary school...ahh, those were the years...not really, but hey...again writing to take up space...the fun of it all...

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-09-12 11:59 AM


uhm...well, actually I was not thinking bout suïcide when I wrote this......LOL....but now I don't feel so good....but I won't do it...Don't have the guts yet....

luv, Virgin Suïcide

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

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