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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-09-05 09:00 AM


BARED, BITTER CHILL:

Touched by your hurt
Compassion flowed
The crying heart
Through tears showed

I know your pain
I've felt your fear
I've seen God
As He draws near

God spoke to me
Showed me your heart
To make you at ease
Give you a start

For it seemed so bad
And probably was
You lived the pain
Then closed yourself

Because pain and guilt
Are bitter pills
They cause confusion
That knawing chill

Of knowing that to feel
Means losing control
Letting the damwall break
Releases your soul

How can you let go
You can't make it alone
The emotional flood
Of mistakes known

So I held you tightly
To show you I care
I'll keep you up
I'll always be there

  So trust in God
  And lay your heart bare.

© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-05 11:56 AM


lovely inspirational piece..well done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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