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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-09-05 06:38 AM


FATE REVERSED:

I saw your hurt plainly through the words
The frustration and desperation, perturbed
Feeling lost, lonely, alone
Can fate not be turned?

I cried in empathy, your pain and mine
One who shared my feeling of being left behind
Grafting my way; two forward, one back
You to remind

Now here I stand changed, in your role
I wonder how you did it, how you became whole
You're gone now, leaving me alone
To the completer of your soul

  And I am empty
  I try to fill your shoes
  But I don't know how
  I can't be you
  I need your loving arms to pull me through.

© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-05 11:58 AM


lots of pain here..hope things work out for you. peace

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-09-05 03:12 PM


enjoyed reading this...reminds me of a few situations I've been in...sometimes when you try to help someone they take out a lot of the pain or anger on you because you are close to them and then they move on and leave you frustrated...I suppose we should offer help with out expecting anything in return...James
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