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Virgin Suïcide
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0 posted 2000-09-05 06:00 AM


Go on
Go on
Eat my heart out
Take your chance

Go on
Drink my blood
Make the best of it

Go on
Punish me
Like you should

Go on
Hurt me
And never stop

HATE ME HATE ME HATE ME!
'Cause I know you do
So go on...



"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-05 12:02 PM


wow! talk about the deep end of the pool..there is danger in the place where you are..be careful Virgin..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Virgin Suïcide
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2 posted 2000-09-05 02:55 PM


I am...sometimes....but just kinda crazy or so....or psycho...or weird....DUNNO WHAT I AM!!! But I'll be careful!

love, Virgin Suïcide...

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
3 posted 2000-09-05 03:20 PM


Awesome poem...the only part I don't get is about the drinking blood thing...maybe I'm being too literal. I went out with a guy who was a vampire (or at least thought he was)...enough of my stories. Anyways I liked it and I'm babbling now just to take up space...isn't that so fun. Ok I'm gonna stop now. Yes I believe I am being stupid.

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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4 posted 2000-09-05 03:31 PM


ok....the drink my blood part is like...dunno....its about some one who takes the things I need away and stuff....so she eats my heart out (= like taking my loved ones away), drinks my blood (=like she really wants to), punishes me (=cuz shes like all and I've beaten her and she can't take it), hurts me (=like cuz she doesn't know me), and just REALLY hates me.....

and I like the nonsence babbling...!! And you're not stupid!!

love, Virgin Suïcide!

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
5 posted 2000-09-05 03:35 PM


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...............I think I get it now....and yes I am...

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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6 posted 2000-09-05 03:37 PM


hehe...

love, Virgin Suïcide!!


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
7 posted 2000-09-06 05:27 PM


Hmmm...seems to be a very angry poem. But not physical anger...it is something in the soul. This poem is very much the summary of what we sometimes feel...
--Little Girl

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
8 posted 2000-09-06 05:32 PM


HATE ME HATE ME HATE ME!
'Cause I know you do
So go on...

Virgin I dont know if I could ever hate you. Maybe be jealous of you for these poems that you write.   But I admire you that it seems like you can write about just anything. Keep up the good work!!!


YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS


Virgin Suïcide
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Posts 319
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9 posted 2000-09-07 03:48 AM


a_little_girl: yes, I was angry while writing it....

ERIN: uuhm...well, the poems may seem to be about different subjects, but a lot of them are just the same...well, for me I guess....and I'm not that good... but I'll keep on writing!

love, to all, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

10 posted 2000-09-07 04:21 AM


Wooooooooooow!!!
Yeah! Let it all out! Love the angry poems!
That's something I've said few weeks ago... but I didn't mean it... I hate it when people hate me, it really tears me apart...

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