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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-04 09:54 AM


WHEN YOU'RE NEEDED THE MOST

Pushing you away,
when I need you the most.
Sitting in the rain,
when you offer me a coat.
Crying in my pillow at night,
when I have your shoulder,
& you to tell me it'll be alright.
Sending you away,
with words of sheer contempt.
Telling you that everythings okay,
when nothing ever is.
Watching you believe my lies,
though wishing I could say,
what's really on my mind.
Too scared of your reaction,
criticism, or rebuff.
Dealing with life all alone,
can sometimes be tough.
Pushing you away,
when you're needed the most.

"I'm so afraid to love you, but more afraid to lose. Clinging to a past that doesn't let me choose."

LOVE ELMO


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pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-04 04:16 PM


ahh..the "he who hesitates is lost" syndrome..been there..want to move forward but can't find the right gear..great images here..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-09-04 04:55 PM


Seen your work in the Teen forum! You are quite talented! As for your situation, I have hestitated many a times...Just remember that if you do not someone's hand, you walk alone. Keep it up! Very nice! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~


~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
3 posted 2000-09-04 07:12 PM


qtpieelmo,
Nice poem, I hope you get over that feeling.. Cuz I too  have it at times.

Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible
So many words, for the broken heart...

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-09-04 08:45 PM


Thanx every1 & hi jessica i saw u in teen too u have great poems yourself   LOVE ELMO
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