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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-03 08:37 PM


STILL HERE

Falling hard & fading fast,
my life's slipping into realms of black.
Starvation makes up for all I lack,
'cause I've got nothing left.
Days get longer, nights grow cold,
falling down a black hole.
I found my escape & firmly took hold,
nbut I'm falling once again.
Depression takes over, my skies turn to gray.
I feel myself slowly slipping away,
& it comes at a cost I can't pay.
Yet I can't let it go.
Fighting myself just to surviive.
Not sure if it's better to be dead or alive.
The years come & go & pass me by,
& I've never felt more alone.
I once reached for others with an outstretched hand,
but they didn't always understand.
So I ended up right where I began,
& I'm still here!

"Whether you think you can or can't you're right!"

LOVE ELMO


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-09-03 08:55 PM


Very interesting...James
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-03 09:23 PM


Yea just like me lol thanx   LOVE ELMO
Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-03 10:05 PM


definitely sparks a lot of thought. . .

well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-09-03 10:21 PM


Thanx sven I'm a very deep thinker   i think i think too hard about things sometimes & thats what gets me in trouble lol   LOVE ELMO <3
moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
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cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-09-04 08:22 AM


still here.. i thank god for these two wonderful words..

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2000-09-04 09:27 AM


LOL, I'm not that lucky to be gone yet, with my luck I'll be here til I'm like 124. God loves to punish me  LOVE ELMO!
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