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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
so what would it be if it wasn't like this with no one around just the two of us no one who cares who will think no love, no hate, no feeling, no expression it would be great a world, so totally different from the way it is now... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I think everybody wants the world to be different...nothing really ever turns out the way we expect it to. Cool poem. Dark Star |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thnx...but it would B great, wouldn't it? like you can think of your own world, with nothing but things YOU like...And just with a person you love...but the only thing is, that fantasies are just fantasies.... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, we can create the world we want. . . but do we really want to give that much effort?? I know that I do. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
awe short & sweet well written LOVE ELMO  |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
I find myself agreeing with Sven, would we really fight for that kind of world?.. but sometimes i think that we don't need those kind of worlds, maybe we already have it, we just don't know it.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the John Lennon song "Imagine". "You may say I'm a dreamer.. but I'm not the only one." James |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Wouldn't that be nice, a utopia if you please, your poem was wonderfully worded! If only it was as simple as we would like to think!! ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I've always been a dreamer too....but I've been disappointed by things I thought would be. Sometimes I feel sooo disenchanted by everything but somewhere inside I still somehow manage to keep a tiny flame of hope alight. I pray that it never burns out. And don't ever stop dreaming. Nice writing!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I say you can't always get what you want, but if you try, sometimes you get what you need. Good poem. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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