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qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-03 02:34 AM


STRUGGLING

Tell me how to say goodbye,
& not release my tears.
Tell me how to sleep at night,
& not realize my fears.
Teach me to be happy like you,
& sing your happy song.
Teach me how to fit in,
to find where I belong.
Show me how to find myself,
I'm lost inside a dream.
Show me how to love myself,
I'm not what I may seem.
Please don't let me die alone,
I need you by my side.
Please stay with me forever more.
Don't run from me & hide.

"We put ourselves down & have become used to the weakness!"

ELMO  

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-03 03:39 AM


qtpieelmo,
this is also strong but has a glimmer of hope in it. I think this one will stay, do you know what I think. I think it's painful to be you, but hang in there life does get better if you let it.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-03 07:56 PM


Thanx Kethry! I know every1 keeps telling me that, but I'm having my doubts. Thanx for taking your time to reply to most of my poems- that helps me a lot & just being part of the passions family does- I can see that I'm not the only one with problems. Yes, I had a very tough life ever since I was about 4, I'm not gonna get into it but my experiences as a child has definatly affected how I am today Thanx again   LOVE ELMO! <3
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