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back again(need a title for my poem!!)
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Well, I'm back again from a holiday! I wrote some poems while I was in Portugal, but at the mo, I just have some kind of inspiration, but no title yet....Sorry if it's about the same topic as all my poems are lately....just can't help it I guess.... < !signature-->Drove by today And saw you sitting there Couldn't help Feeling sad Didn't think About you much Lately But suddenly it all came up How we used to sit there Just sitting Quiet thoughts Loving us You sitting on the couch Me laying next to you Just listening To your easy play You, holding my hands Kissing my face Telling me You'd never let go I, always believed You really ment The things You said But now all there is left Is just a hole Deep in my heart But still I can't forget The things you said And still got some hope That you will come back And tell me It was just A big mistake You'd never let go And you Will hold me again And never let go This time for real... So, if anyone can think of a title for this one??? "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this was bittersweet...and i enjoyed it. how about "hold me again"? (just a title thought) ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Virgin, this is sharp but nice. How about "you said" as a title.Glad you're back I've missed your work. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thank you guys... Glad I'm back...I just found out a sort of tune where you can sing it on.... sounds kinda funny.... love, Virgin Suïcide "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
SAD ! How about "I Believed" for a title John D LeClare(I always use my full name so people don't ask me If I am John LeClair the hocky player  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can't believe I'm coming up with a crazy title like this...my suggestion is "Sitting on the couch." I will definately be alright if you don't use it but you stirred up some memories...James |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
sorry if it causes bad memories or something... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
What about, "Unable to forget, unwilling to let go" great read. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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