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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-09-02 04:36 AM


Here's the deal on this one: I wrote it a long time ago. I posted it in Teen #3. And to all of you's who have read the other poems here by me should understand some of this. My sister's baby was taken away. He is the most precious thing in my life besides my boyfriend. She was to busy with her "social life" to care what was going on. The state was gonna take the baby away (not really a baby a 3 year old boy). They described her as an "unfit mother" which she is. I lied to keep the baby here. And now shes back to screwing around. Enjoy!

You are someone,
that I despise.
All you know how to do,
is make up lies.

I look at you,
and only think of hate.
Death is the only thing,
I think is your fate.

Once they took him away,
I thought you would change to the way you should.
But of course you didnt,
you became worse and did whatever you could.

One day your son's gonna realize.
that this is all true.
And he is never gonna forgive,
the things you used to do.



~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
Nikolette Sadness
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1 posted 2000-09-02 04:42 AM


wow! very touching...and girl you need to lay the smack down on your sis...cuz uhh children are our future...or somthin like that

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-02 04:45 AM


Wow! Now I think I realise what a pain is your sis... I agree with Nik!!!
(How did you get them to leave the boy with you?)

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-02 04:56 AM


Nikolette~~~I bet if you hit my "sister" with a baseball bat she wouldnt change her ways. Trust me I am looking forward to the day that I leave this house.

LM~~~He wasnt with me. His grandparents called DCFS (Department of Children and Family Services). And he stayed with his grandparents for about a month. But the thing that I dont understand is how could someone do this to a little boy? I mean God didnt create him for her to keep her boyfriend (cause thats what she got pregnant for). But I really would love to have him for myself. I took care of him everyday for the past 2 months. And he loved it. I showed him what real parents are supposed to do. Taking him for walks, letting him play on his bike and all that good stuff that his parents dont do with him.

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