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DeathTrippy
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA

0 posted 2000-09-01 08:52 PM


Dieing in writting
How close to reality?
I feel death in me
Surging out of me
Writting

Death in words
Can I die?
Give in to depression
Find my knife
Impaled

Suicidal poetry
Does it encourage?
Bring courage?
Aid me?
Questions

Dieing inside
Can I convey it?
Suicidal message
Hidden from the world
Masks

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darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-09-01 09:43 PM


Wow...really cool poem...I liked it a lot.
"Death in words
Can I die?
Give in to depression
Find my knife
Impaled"

cool stuff...

Dark Star


poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-09-02 12:39 PM


its really good to see you back!
and you are still as dark as ever, but i hope all is well.
looking forward to more!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
3 posted 2000-09-02 03:42 PM


after a holiday, this is really good to read!
keep on writing!

love, Virgin Suïcide


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

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