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Dark Poetry #2

Without an error

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-09-01 02:11 AM

This cycle of hope,
I turn to once more,
Riding upon the clouds you enter my life,
I ask god, what have I done to receive such a prize,
All seems joyous as we meet over and over
But will this moment go on and on forever?
Many have traveled this road of terror,
To what guarantee you provide that we will make it without an error?

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-09-01 03:23 AM

What a lovely expression "Riding upon the clouds you enter my life" !! Really nice poem

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-01 05:27 AM

OOOhhh! So great! So many ask this quastion... And I too liked the line
"Riding upon the clouds you enter my life"
Take care!

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-09-01 12:29 PM

Thank you for your comments my friend.

Ronil

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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