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So Many Things look good in Red
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So Many Things look good in Red |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
So Many Things look good in Red I can’t remember why I like the color red, And I don’t know for who she bled, my friend, Can I ask you favor in the end? Please send this feeling away, It’s eating away at me, I no longer feel whole, Bending, wavering, then finally fading me away, Fading to what? I dare not say, But I know, it’s nothing I’d like to stay, “Shhh. It’s only in your head” You say. “Open you eyes.” She says. But I’ve been blind for such a very long time, I can’t let in the light, my eyes don’t open anymore, You can leave the lights off, I really don’t mind, Cause I’ve been blind for such a long time, Shhh. I know, it’s only in my head. And I can’t remember what she said, I don’t know what I should have said, All I remember is that she looks good in red, It’s taken me such a long time to see, Such a long time to find what it means to be me, But I finally know what it takes to set me free, and my friend I do see again, and you know what I find? So many things look good in red. < !signature--> ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I [This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Ahhh Deranger, I do like this one. Very cool poem! (The only red I look good in is my hair. *LOL*)  ...chanson~- - - - - - - "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Vey cool poem...omigosh! I'm saying "cool." Oh, help! Let me think of something more befitting to say... Nope! Cool will do. Keep em coming deranger and I'll keep devouring them. How strange! Do you ever read something and then write the exact same thing with out thinking about it? How about awesome poem instead? < !signature-->Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is hot, Deranger, you. An extraordinary poem. I must save it to read again, if I may ?! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
yes red is a very nice colour indeed! and this poem is great as well! *smile* (sorry about the colour, just couldnt help myself) ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"..The lady in red is dancing with me cheek to cheek..." I  red!Good poem, Take care! |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Chansondegeste: Red hair  Sonjes: Cool is cool with me, wait…uh. Lotharingia: Well, don’t burn yourself (:, of course you can save it! We’re all here to share, right? As for the extraordinary part, I think this one could have been drug induced… Poutprincess: Hehe, red is a good color…. LM: Devil in a red dress? Cause I have seen them in all colors  Thank you all, this is a great departure from the usual gloomy depressing crap I write…mmm, red…. --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh you have brought back memories. Something nice to have around a sexy woman in a red silk nightgown...James |
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