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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-08-31 07:23 PM




The pain I have,
soon enough will be free.
But until then,
you will just have to accept me.

It is so hard for me,
to put out this burning flame.
And until it is out,
you will be the one I blame.

They say sisters are one,
up to the end.
But I refuse to call you that,
and your are not someone I would even call a friend.

This pain hurting me,
is all because of you.
You did this to me,
because you wanted to.

Until the day comes,
I have nothing left to say.
Just that I look forward,
to the much happier days.



~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-08-31 07:33 PM


Umm, don’t worry!  I don’t (always) get along with my sister either.  

Yeah, lalala!  The silver lining and all that.  Something better is always on the horizon!



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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-08-31 11:33 PM


Hon from one who only has half sisters and soul sisters, I know how truly wonderful some sisters' relationships are.  I know you hurt right now, but please don't do anything that could ruin the gift you have in family/your sister.
If you need to talk email me..
Isis

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-31 11:53 PM


Deranger~~~I NEVER get along with her. I cant stand being in the same room with her. Unfortunatly (not for long) I have to live in the same house as her.

Isis~~~I honestly have no gift with her. With my dad and my nephew I do. But me and her just arent a gift. I am telling you NOBODY would be able to stand her for 1 day. My boyfriend always tells me to ignore her. I told him stay with her for one day he refused. A couple hours and he still refused. She is the walking devil. Honestly. She is the cruelest most cold hearted person on the face of this earth.

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-09-01 05:43 AM


Hmmm. I first read this poem thinking your "sister" was your ego, or some other part of you. But I am obssessed by things of that nature, so take no notice of me.
I wonder what your sister did. She sounds like a complete fiend. Don't let her get the better of you!!!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-09-01 08:19 AM


Hey! sometimes I feel the same about my Sis!
She can be quite terrible and apperently... she likes it! She likes driving me insane!
I think I'm learning to ignore her lately...
Is your sister older or younger than you? Mine is 6 years younger than I.

[This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-01-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-09-01 01:18 PM


Lothringia~~~All my life she always had something bad to say about me. She starts fight with me and all the other good stuff. While I stay here and take care of her son she works. And she couldnt even pay me for that! She takes all my clothes. You name it she takes it. Shes a liar. What else can I say?

LM~~~My sister is 3 years old then me. Alot of people tell me to ignore her. But its like she never shuts up about anything!

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