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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-08-31 11:28 AM


Deeply

I would not...even for a moment...
Relinquish one ache of my heart
For the power to forget.



© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
silentsky
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-08-31 04:39 PM


incredibly beautiful
i like that it is short and does not try to drag itself out....its just there. flat out. but it makes me think...
thanks,
shira

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-08-31 05:15 PM


Oh, how true
I love this little gem
Liz

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-09-01 11:50 AM


Hi Rex,

ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-09-01 09:14 PM


Aches of the heart or feelings are the very essence of a person, and it IS a wise man or woman that knows this, and wouldn't dare reliquinsh the above.
Beautifully written my friend  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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