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demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
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Dehradun

0 posted 2000-08-31 11:08 AM


A FLASH OF GOLD IN FIELDS OF GREEN

Amidst the fields of endless green
I spied a flash of purest gold
Scarce believing what I had seen
I shut my eyes the sight to hold

And imprint in my inner eye
Beside your image in my heart
And escaped from my lips a sigh
And my eyes opened with a start

I looked out the window once again
But the green fields were long gone past
As I rushed along in the speeding train
I thought of the years flown by so fast

That solitary sunflower was none but You
The endless fields the canvas of my life
The speeding train my life running through
Your destiny denying me the wine of life

Deepak Menon



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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-31 11:29 AM


life does pass so quickly..takes only a moment to lose our chance.
this was very lovely.
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-31 01:39 PM


What a great poem...so true, life passes by so fast, you have to keep your eyes open wide alllll the time!
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-31 02:45 PM


Hi demoninlove,

In a blink of an eye and all that you've known is now but a dream, awesome read, so much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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