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Welcome back my dear
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Welcome back my dear |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Earth shattering your veins, As the spouting of blood brings more vain, Bleeding your soul with the sorrows of the past, Clouds of disgust you finally cast, Reflection upon reflection you spot in the mirror, drumming of lost soul you heed in the rear, clearing the river full of Adam and eve’s, as you drown yourself in the apple’s greed, peeling your soul liberates the demons at last, welcome back my dear to your lovely past. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Whoooohaaaaaa!!!!  What a great piece! I love your poetry! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
WOW! "clearing the river full of adam and eve's, as you drown yourself in apple's greed" very well done X! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
 Wow this one sizzles. Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You guys just spoil me. Great graphics  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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