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aPaThEtiK_aNGeL
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since 2000-08-29
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0 posted 2000-08-30 06:32 PM


Sorry Isis for that last poem I was just upset when I wrote that... well here's a new one, it's a little depressing but I don't mean to sound morbid or anything.

Feel the broken window panes shattered in my heart,
take it - break it- fix it, it falls right back apart,
feel the challis-textured of everything, that I have ever known,
as it melts away from me, to the marrow of my bone,
feel the reflection in my mirror,
she has her own soul,
she's missing a part of her, she'll never become whole,
feel the sun rise up at day,
as the moon shall run away-
feel the broken pieces of my heart,
take it- break it- fix it, it falls right back apart.

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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-08-30 06:42 PM


Interesting form and reads so well....
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-08-30 06:52 PM


I glad you weren’t intimidated in to never posting again!  That’s a tragedy.  
The moderators are just doing there job,  they’re great people they just have to um, well, moderate.  

Your work is very delicious, yum yum yum.  Can’t wait to eat, uh…um read more…hahalalalala!  



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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-30 07:47 PM


Angel~~~I liked this one. The part that says "take it-break it-fix it-it falls right back apart". You know at points in my life that seems just to true. Well I hope to see more!
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