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Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-08-30 03:23 PM


No more tears
   of pain
fill my eyes.
No more hurt
   or shame
fill my mind.
I'm dead, and I have no worries.
*Hakunna Matatta*
what a wonderful phrase.
No longer do I have to claw my way
through all these painful days.
I've waited for this day for so long,
and its finally here.
I don't care... I have no fear.
I begin to cry, and it hurts.
It's a pain that is so deep,
so intense,
that it comes from the deepest part of my
empty stomach.
I fall to my knees, and sit there,
crying for hours on end.
I wake up and realize that it was only a dream.
One I wish would come true.
Facing reality,
I feel the pain begin
all over again.
Another painful day
is well on it's way.  


I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~



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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-30 04:35 PM


Ohhh....  
See my other comment!

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
2 posted 2000-08-30 09:36 PM


The sun still shines....how can this be? when the world ends......
     Good write....Thanks!

Click


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-01 06:40 PM


Reminds me of a very painful period long ago.
I was suffering from a divorce and lingering in my pain...hoping I would win her back...and she never gave me any hope.
I would pray to god that I would not wake up in the morning over and over again...yet each new morning I would awaken and the same intense pain would still be waiting for me...torturing me...permeating my heart and soul...I hope I never feel this much pain again...it is torture to be caught in the web of pain...all in my past now...some regrets linger...James

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-09-01 07:36 PM


I know that pain too Lil' One.  My life, most lives are no bed of roses, as others seem to think.  We have to be the change we wish to see in the world, all changes must begin with us..
Have that R&R hon, rethink things and I promise they will be better again..
That journey may be hazardous but is worth the rewards when you reach your plateau or sanctuary    *hugs*  
Isis

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-09-02 04:50 AM


Lil one~~~This is the way that I feel just in your words. This is the way my "sister" makes me feel.

I feel the pain begin
all over again.
Another painful day
is well on it's way

Sounds like how I feel when she starts with me. One day we are both gonna be free from this pain. Onto a better life. And until that day comes I wish you the best.

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