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Dark Poetry #2

Scene One

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-30 02:11 AM

Lights, Camera, Action
Flashes, But no reaction
Smile for me
Make it seem like your so happy
even though your hearts torn out
act out scene one in this
way so you'll make them
walk this way.
The crowd cheers on
the lights fade dim
the curtain falls
and I fall too.
On the stage I am amazed
but behind the scenes
I dream of how I am
just me , If ever
I could be
but yet
the
play
goes
on.

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

1 posted 2000-08-30 03:22 AM

your poem touched me...made me cry i will admit.
really beautiful
shira

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-30 11:07 AM

thank you so much silentsky, I try to let my soul reach out to others it is the highest compliment when someone is touched by my words. Life is just a shadow of our existence. In other words without really living how can I live but we all must be ourselves and so often we're always trying to make someone else happy. Have a great day!

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-08-31 03:03 AM

Great poem.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-08-31 01:01 PM

thanks xeonex, scene one came from someone we pretend to be at times, with me I can not pretend it all comes back and slaps me in the face. I guess we all have a few different personalities.

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