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0 posted 2000-08-30 02:10 AM



Glory of kings you shall take,
If you agree to the offer I make,

Mythical creatures you shall command,
But first you must fulfill my demand,

Genie in a bottle is what you desire,
Then free me from these manacles of fire,


Knowledge of all time you shall receive,
If you free me before the next eve,

You will rule the cosmic past,
If you decide to free me at last,

Heaven and hell you shall govern,
But you must choose wisely and learn,

Fate of mine rest on your choice,
Welcome a life full of rejoice,
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Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).




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1 posted 2000-08-30 02:15 AM


Sounds like a good offer...



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2 posted 2000-08-30 06:14 AM


Hey, Xeonox (or devil?) , I'll have to think about it! Lol  
Great poem, though I'll have to reread it once again later, have to go study now!      
I've been meaning to do that for the last 3 hours!!!! (that's why the Knowledge part seem so appealing   )

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3 posted 2000-08-30 04:40 PM


My offer still stands, but do you trust me (devil)?  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-08-30 06:59 PM


Xeonos (devil)...I think it likely an proposal but one must take it with certian requisitions attatched....
: }~
Until...ali


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dwells in every soul..."
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I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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5 posted 2000-08-30 07:51 PM


Good poem Xeonox. But I wouldnt take the offer!
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6 posted 2000-08-30 08:11 PM


Xeonox,
Very tempting offer....

Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible
So many words, for the broken heart, it's so hard to see in a crimson love...
All goo

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7 posted 2000-08-30 08:16 PM


You guys are crazy!!  Sign me up Xeonox(Devil).          



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Xeonox
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8 posted 2000-08-30 09:09 PM


Give me your soul and the rest is yours. (whatever that is left) HAHA, (LOL)

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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