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Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-08-29 03:36 PM

He walks amidst the stars of night,
he beams a bright celestial light
-To set my lonely heart aflame-
And hepelessly, I float away
I'm swept along confusion bay.
I'm drifting past the shore of chance,
where happy hearts together dance.
A whirlpool of forbidden thought
where love's strong current has me caught.
I smash upon the rocks of doubt
defenselessly I'm tossed about.
I'm trapped within a sea of tears,
I'm rocked by violent waves of fear.
My boat is broken by the tide,
my longing passions all subside.
I'm emptied in a pool of calm
to watch the water sweep my qualms.
Away into the depths of loss
and with despair, they twist and toss.
And on the bank in angels light,
his smile illuminates the night.
*But he is still out of reach*

I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-29 04:34 PM

WoW! It's such a beauty!!!
I can't even express how much I enjoyed it!

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

2 posted 2000-08-29 07:54 PM

Thanks, Myra. If it wasn't for you... I'm not gonna say it here, but I'll email you. ((HUGS))

I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-08-29 10:07 PM

You go girl. You got great talent. I loved this read. You just keep them coming and I will try to keep up with you.

Ronil

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Chained2illusions
Junior Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

4 posted 2000-08-30 12:08 PM

Lil, this is lovely!!!

I enjoy the way it flows and the images!

Along with knowing the feeling of feeling as if you are drowning in someone.

Lovin' it!

Denise

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-08-30 09:51 PM

This is so nice, it flows along, and takes the reader with it. Great expression of these feelings.
Sandra

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