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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
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0 posted 2000-08-29 02:52 AM


Today I took a trip into fantasy.
Looking for a little ecstasy.
I found instead a very different place,
filled with passion and love and grace.

I went into my fantasy with open eyes,
I did not have to tell you lies.
You helped me overcome the pain.
For you loved me all the same.

Just for the time we were together,
I felt as if there was no other.
And even though miles seperate,
The time we shared was truly great.

I hope to find you again some day,
To share reality in our special way.
So until then I will be dreaming,
Of you my love, with a smile beaming.



"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

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1 posted 2000-08-29 02:53 AM


Great, cute, sweet, and short little poem.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
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2 posted 2000-08-29 04:11 PM


Ohhh....Dee, cute poem!  
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3 posted 2000-08-29 10:38 PM


Very nice, Dee. Whats the status these days?
I am still rooting for you.
Sandra

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4 posted 2000-08-30 11:09 AM


beautiful poem Dee
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