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ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-08-28 02:01 PM


Note: Well hello folkses! I haven't posted in EONS it seems like ^_^;; forgive me, I have had problems lately more than ever.


Sometimes the things you hate the most
can only make you love more.
Sometimes the things for which you boast
weren't welcomed at your door.
but I love him, and he loves me,
and that is all we need.
We are enough for each other and we
follow each other's lead.
He never doubted me because
he knew that I could see,
He isn't an angel, and if he was,
he wouldn't be right for me.


© Copyright 2000 Mary K. - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-28 02:11 PM


"he never doubted me because
he knew that i could see
he isnt an angel, and if he was,
he wouldnt be right for me"

you just said that perfectly!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-28 03:49 PM


Oh yes... agree with Dawn, well said!
Great poem, take care!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-08-28 03:57 PM


I have thought this so many times.
I want an angel...no wait I'm not an angel so why should I want an angel...she wouldn't be right for me...James

Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
4 posted 2000-08-28 05:47 PM


Oh, to have an Angel…
It would be pure bliss, undeniable joy!
Or would it?
I can’t tell you, I’ve never met an angel,
Only demons.

Nice work, Deathscythe...



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MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
5 posted 2000-08-28 11:20 PM


how could you all have not noticed that im an angel?!??! hahaha....ok no far from it...but anyways...loved the poem...especially that line that everyone loves...awesome work!

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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