navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » Linked
Dark Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic Linked Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-08-27 07:52 PM


Are we to go through life,
Dealing with this phenomena?
Dealing with a 'link' that is beyond comprehension,
Beyond our understanding?

It's comforting sure,
And a special treat,
But to merely think of you,
And then to feel your presence, that is quite a feat!

So simply it happens,
It's so natural and true,
My thoughts flitter to you,
And there you are - peek a boo!

Psychic ability enhanced by love,
A special joining, a reminder to share,
I am not questioning it,
But it's always there.

It could be merely two lonely hearts,
Linked by the light that won't cease,
They feel it often, tis always there,
Linked by a dream of love and peace.

Whatever it is,
I'm grateful it will always be there,
A little star shining each and every night,
Reminding us there is someone out there who cares.


*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
1 posted 2000-08-27 09:01 PM


Isis, I enjoyed this light-hearted presentation yet feel the deep meaning.

Very nice  ...chanson~

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-08-27 09:03 PM


Thanks Chanson you got the light heartedness and the deeper meanings, I couldn't ask for more!!  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2000-08-27 09:07 PM


wow sis
*hugs*  this sounds alot like us.  we have a very strong link hun.  that will always be there.  no matter how far away we are we will always be linked in our hearts and souls.  great peice sis.  *hugs*
love ya
jesse

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-08-27 09:12 PM


Not quite Jesse, I'm referring to the link that you 'feel' what they do, when they do.  Know when they are in trouble or danger, without a word from them.  Feel their pain, even though you may not have seen them for months or years.  You 'feel' an oncoming connection, minutes before they ring you, that kind of thing.
yes Jess we have a link too, of hearts and minds spanning the globe, but not this strongly..
Glad you liked it though *hugs*  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Xeonox
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
5 posted 2000-08-27 10:38 PM


I loved this two lines:
My thoughts flitter to you,
And there you are - peek a boo!


Great work as always.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-27 10:47 PM


Almost magical feel about this Isis...I enjoyed it, it gives the reader a sense of hope in a way...

MY question is: do you really feel this connection with someone? I don't want to know who...that's prying where my nose doesn't belong   BUT, wow! If you do, that is something else...that makes this poem all the more special.  That would be something I wouldn't ignore...listen to me going on...I need to stop.  BUT...WOW!!!!!!!


Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-08-28 01:07 AM


Thanks Xeonox, I'm glad you liked those lines, I was worried it was a bit childish, but what the hey!!  
Sonjes, thanks also hon.  I'll email my answer to you...  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
8 posted 2000-08-28 01:14 AM


it would be nice to share that kind of link with somebody.....you are a special woman, Isis, in many ways.
~Dawn

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-08-28 01:25 AM


Thanks so much Dawn!!  That warrants a *hug*  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » Linked

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary